Another poem, please rate?

This is more of a imagery poem and all please rate I wrote this in the 5th grade so I was 11…. I’m now 13 and have made little changes here and there but not many so please rate!

Blue Memories

Blue is Beauteous

Blue smells like boysenberries baking in the golden sun
Fresh wintry air
Magnificent sparkling flowers
The salty ocean water

Blue sounds like birds chirping in the early dawn
Rippling waterfalls hitting the cold sea
A baby boy begging for food
Wind chimes singing in the bustling breeze

Blue feels like soft blankets of Forget-Me-Nots in the lonely garden
A bluegill swimming against your legs
Miserable memories of horrible nightmares
Rain pouring down against your head

Blue tastes like juniper berries picked straight from the grove
Blueberry pie crisp out of the oven
Appetizing blue - raspberry ice cream from the parlor
Mouth-watering blueberry muffins fresh from the bakery
Blue looks like a toddler’s face smeared with blueberry jam
A blue moon in the starry speckled sky
A sapphire ring on a finger of an old, lonely woman
Shadows on the newly fallen snow

Blue is beauteous

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